*Chapter 14 **"So if we want to say that Susan fancies men that are, if funny, then also handsome, the afterthought version is ''la suzyn. cinynei ro melbi naja xajmi nanmu''" -- doesn't the lojban say "Susan fancies men that are, if beautiful, then also funny"? ** "Tip: This can actually turn out handy..." > "Tip: This turns out to be handy..." or "Tip: This can actually be handy..." or ''something'' ** Exercise 4.3: it didn't make any sense to me, so I ran it through jbofi'e, which doesn't like it either ** Answer to exercise 4.2: "Also, Zhang either dances better than Ranjeet, or drunk (at that time). (Or: when he's not drunk.)" The parallel contruction is faulty. Suggest deleting "either" and inserting "is" > "or is drunk" ** s/someting/something/